Next Step: Calling All Screenwriters and Storytellers
IMPORTANT NOTE: DUE TO THE POVERWHLEMING RESPONSE TO THIS CALL TO ACTION – WE ARE TEMPORARILY NO LONGER ACCEPTING SUBMISSIONS as we begin the process of reviewing submissions to date.
We will announce when we re-open the submission process. Thank you – Vincent Ladoret
Original post: This post is one that I’ve wanted to write for quite a long time.
Now that “Mobius” is out in the open I’d like to send a call out to all screenwriters and storytellers.
During the past 18 months, and as a result in part of “Mobius” – I have had a chance to meet a lot of people in the film industry.
As of yesterday, executives at two major studios, a few key senior creatives at a two large agencies have expressed interest in doing a variety of projects – all the way up to feature films.
I am obviously incredibly excited with those prospects – but the one key ingredient that I am always on the lookout for is a great screenplay or idea.
Given the traffics that this blog gets, I have been waiting for the right time to put a call out there to screenwriters and fellow creatives. My goal would be to keep this idea out there long term. And here it is:
In doing so:
1. _You will retain all copyright and ownership of the material submitted. By submitting your script or idea – you make zero commitment to me or Laforet Visuals Inc. in any way. There is no obligation to follow through on either end. And you are not making any guarantee of exclusivity whatsoever. You are free to do submit the same screenplay to other parties.
2. _Your screenplay will not be shared with anyone else outside of Laforet Visuals Inc. or on this blog or anywhere else without prior written confirmation from you.
3. _ You must be the original author (or co-author) of the material.
4. _ All rights, fees etc. will be negotiated once we mutually agree to move forward together on a project.
5. _My goal is to make this as close to a zero risk offer to screenwriters and storytellers that I can make – with no downside potential whatsoever.
6. _ If you do not have a screenplay – but know of an incredible story, or one that you’d like to have adapted – I welcome that as well. I do know a few extremely successful and talented screenwriters – not to mention studio heads with a wide array of talented people at their disposal.
Lastly – I’m adding this point after the fact: I am fully aware that there are legal ramifications with soliciting scripts in the manner. I always have been. I do think that times are changing and that new business models, and ways of discovering talent, ideas and people are burgeoning as a result. And I am embracing that fact and moving ahead. I may need to forward your script to a third party first (an agent) prior to contacting you. Either way – I will get your permission to do so should that be necessary. This request is but a first step.
Two more things:
I have already received 50 submissions today alone. So kindly don’t expect a reply until we’ve been able to read through the material.
Lastly – and most importantly – this is an open call that has no short-term deadline. Consider this an open ended call to entries long term.
I’m Many of you may not know that you can register and protect your screenplays (and ideas) by going to the WGA and others. This gives you a good piece of mind that the scripts your send out won’t be turned down and mysteriously appear on screen with some other writer’s name in the titles a year later. I recommend you do so for all of your work.
Here are the three types of content that I am looking for:
1 _30-60 second spots. Companies are regularly coming to me to do promotional videos for them – including ad agencies. These are all too often last minute – and rarely allow for the development of a good script. Having a few at the ready is a good thing.
2. _Short films – no longer than 20 minutes in length.
3. _Long form narrative films.
Basically, the idea is to find either established, or undiscovered talent out there who’d like to see their work on a screen (on a TV, a computer monitor or on the silver screen) through the power of crowdsourcing on the web.
I know there are a lot of talented people out there who have great ideas/scripts that would love to work with a group of talented filmmakers and actors out there.
The idea is to bring people together.
This has the potential to be a part of a much larger project that I have been discussing with a few companies as well.
The story / idea / screenplay is the genesis of any spot / short / film. I am a firm believer that a great story is at the heart of every great film.
And for what it’s worth, here are some of my favorite films for reference:
Brazil – for its incredible originality and incredible ability to hit on what the future could potentially bring.
Boys Don’t Cry – for how incredibly raw, relevant and impactful the story was.
Bladerunner – an incredible visual journey and look into the future.
Full Metal Jacket – the best first half of a film… incredible characters and dialogue.
Close Encounters of a Third Kind – made me want to become a film maker.
Aliens – incredibly strong science fiction thriller.
Tree of Life – incredible visuals and wonderful look into the tensions between a a son and father.
Any Coen Brother film.
Chariots of Fire – wonderful story based on historical facts.
Shawshank Redemption – incredible story and performances.
Run Lola Run / Amelie / Delicatessen / La Femme Nikita (Luc Besson) – originals.
Malcolm X – I loved the book, the film, the true story.
Jaws – can never swim in open water w/o a scuba mask as a result (to see what is underneath me…)
Pretty much anything with Robert Deniro in it. Especially the early stuff.
Basically – a very eclectic group of films – all with a strong story or idea as their foundation. I love films that make you think. I love films that make you feel. I love films that make us dream.
Let’s see what happens… as I said: there is the potential for this to be a part of a much larger idea that is already underway. More to come on that at some point…
dope , im gonna translate my screenplay from dutch to english for you . its a mixture of : kids , adulthood , kidulthood , la hein ( vincent cassel ) and trainspotting
what u think vince ?
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 5th, 2011 at 3:18 am
Can’t wait! Thank you!
Hi, I tried submitting to this but received this message:
Delivery to the following recipient failed permanently:
projects@vincentlaforet.com
Technical details of permanent failure:
Google tried to deliver your message, but it was rejected by the recipient domain. We recommend contacting the other email provider for further information about the cause of this error. The error that the other server returned was: 550 550 No Such User Here” (state 14).
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 5th, 2011 at 11:15 pm
Ah – sorry – I had a lot of problems on the WIFI on the flight and you should be sending to: production (at) vincentlaforet.com – thanks!
Sent one of my scripts, can only hope you enjoy the read , regardless of your decision one way or another.
Not to be that guy, but…”Jaws, The Shinning, Psycho, Silence of the Lambs” aren’t those horror films? just horror films made by great directors with amazing casts, music, visuals, and story??
Had to do it.. forgive me lol.
Anyways, thanks for this chance, and you keep kicking ass!
The email in this post is bouncing my mail … if you could be so kind as provide a working one I would appreciate it.
Yours,
David Bell
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 5th, 2011 at 11:14 pm
Kindly try again at production (at) vincentlaforet.com
You are a brave fella Mr. Laforet. Best of luck with this project.
Hi Vincent
Your email link is not working…
I think I may just have an idea for an awesome short
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 5th, 2011 at 11:13 pm
Ok – odd. You’re not alone. Just kindly send to production (at) vincentlaforet.com – thanks!
Excited to read the the momentum of your ambition and tenacity towards the craft. I’ll be forwarding this post to all my writing groups. You’ll be receiving a couple of submissions! By the way, this post does not show up on your front page. I was notified via RSS.
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 10:34 am
Thanks Mason! Very much appreciate it – the blog has been acting very very oddly. Likely due to traffic!
I sent my idea/ screnplay in. Hope you like it!
PS- I think that Mobius is BY FAR your best work yet. Keep up the great work!!
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 1:39 pm
Thank you Sam – on both notes! It’s the first thing I’ve shot that I’m happy with.
Muy buen post ,me gusto muchisimo, espero que te guste
un saludo
Vincent,
What about stuff for something thats more documentary style rather than narrative? Can we send in stuff like that too?
Greg
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 5:39 pm
Only narratives based on real events at this point. I LOVE documentaries – but i’ve been a photojournalist for 20 years and am not as keen personally on working on documentaries at this point in my career.
Just sent my screenplay as well, hope it will at least give you an interessing read.
After seeing what you did with Mobius the prospect of working with you is quite exciting!
I’m quite thankful for the existence of such a project. Good luck with it mate!
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 5:38 pm
Thanks Raphael!
Full Metal Jacket, amazing that you, me and the rest of the world are drawn only to the first half of that film. It’s as if the second half is a totally different movie.
As for ideas, I will send my idea. others feel it should be done although I feel it is quite lame.
Hello Vince, I am native Dutch speaker. Have since 2004 cultivate compelling idea’s for two commercials (mobile device & Soccer or Football championship event), twosome Sci-Fi bigscreen stuffs both 3D ready (one disaster and other championship event). I am not a screenplay writer. Only have written in Dutch a childrenbook, which yet to develop the illustrations. Now devloping some web/mobile apps to earn first the $$ for later to find a co-writer to write the screeplay. No idea is any worthy till it’s executed. Where to start?
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 5:38 pm
Find a friend who is willing to work w/ you on the screenplay. You’d be surprised how many good people there are out there. Getting connected is the hardest thing…
I began writing a science fiction story a while ago. I need to get past two chapters though! Should I send in what I have at any rate? It’s not a screenplay but the start of a novel.
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 5:37 pm
Sure.
Thanks to everyone for their submissions so far. Have received nearly 30 so far which is fantastic. Keep them coming. This is a long term open offer by the way – so no rush. I’m into deep recovery mode as I’ve been working 2 months without a day off. Therefore I’m catching up on some very needed rest – will be in touch soon.
Vincent. Well done on Mobius. The acting and cinematography were a cut above.
Question for ya. In these submissions, are you looking for a story/stories that you want to direct only or are these also potentially for you to produce?
I’m a working writer/director, and I have a couple of high concept features that i prize, and have been sitting on for some time. Problem is, I want to direct them =)
Thanks.
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 10:54 pm
That is the ultimate problem isn’t it 😉 I’m not looking to move into producing at this point – although I do enjoy putting talented people together very much. These are pieces that you would have to be comfortable having me direct. So kindly send them to me if you’d like to consider that option. Otherwise I say go for it on your own – by all means!
Exactly how long of a treatment do you want to look over?
Also on another note, I have a few short stories written out that I see to be done in stop motion, it that something you would consider?
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 10:52 pm
Not sure about stop motion. But I’ll consider it for sure – I never say no (because you never know..) A 2-3 paragraph treatment to several pages works for me.
No films from the 30s or 40s? You’re very lucky; you have them to discover. I recommend (for what it’s worth) 12 O’Clock High (watch it a few times, it has a lot to say about crowd-sourcing, or the issues of organizing people in a common goal that is difficult), (you don’t like comedy, try any Preston Sturges, like Sullivans Travels, The Lady Eve), All About Eve, All Quiet On The Western Front (the granddaddy of all war movies). Can’t forget On The Waterfront.
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 6th, 2011 at 10:51 pm
Oh No – I love those – all the way back to the first silent films… studied them all. I just thought most of this audience wouldn’t be aware of them… 12 O’Clock High was amazing!
Wow, Mobius is just wonderful, really nice stuff. My brother is a photographer in Dallas and sent me your stuff. I have two ideas you might be interested in – both true stories. One is about a famous shrink in Beverly Hills treating Holocaust survivors in the 60’s, a shrink who grew up in Nazi Germany and served in Hitler’s Army . The other is a juvenile ghost story that took place in Vancouver in the 1930’s, not a horror story, the ghost was not at all threatening except to the parents who didn’t believe their son. In fact, the boy didn’t believe it as an adult until he revisited his childhood home in his 40’s and was asked by the current owner if he had ever seen this particular ghost. I have full rights to both stories and will send along materials if you thinks it’s down your alley.
Hi Vincent,
Amazing work on the film! Very impressive in all aspects of the production and final result.
P.S: I have two ideas which I think are incredibly promising for feature films. One is for a dark, psych-horror-thriller akin to the shining and with Lynch elements.
The other is a Sci-Fi set in the future, also gritty (think Jonny Neumonic, Blade-Runner) but more to do with dreams.
Very well thought out concepts at this point (soon to be put to treatment) and later Scripts. Just an FYI as I think either of which could make for an amazing collaboration 🙂
Vlad
Vincent, my brother-in-law Jason Fukura referred me to you. I sent you two shorts – one last night, and one this morning which is probably more in line with what you’re looking for. Visually, I think they’re both potentially interesting, but the one I sent just minutes ago is a drama, which you seem to be more interested in making.
Since we’re talking about early films, have you seen Luis Bunuel and Salvador Dali’s Un Chien Andalou? I have to assume you have.
@Vincent Laforet, Thanks for the fast response, I’ll look through what I have and send them onto you.
Wow… this is fantastic! I think we’re in a funny place where, as technology becomes cheaper, the focus on creative process and craftsmanship becomes rarer. I.e. we’re all so excited about the availability of new tools that we forget about Story and what they’re supposed to be used for…
Anyway- seeing as I have a dayjob and my time is limited, my writing time is really only on Friday afternoons these days. I have a ~20 min short that I’m working on, but due to the lack of time- probably won’t be finished even in a first draft state for a couple months…
Would it be more beneficial to send you a treatment now, or finish the first draft of the whole script in a couple months and send that then (I would say both- but odds are that as I flesh out the script, the basic story will change too)?
BTW all the movies you listed are awesome!
Really- thanks for doing this, I hope it brings success to you and all you work with.
Dammit. I’ve got a 90 page romcom script ready, and you want what? A dark horror movie? ;-( Good luck with your project, though, and keep up the good work! I really, really enjoy your films and blog.
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 8th, 2011 at 5:49 pm
If it’s as good as “Aliens” or “The Thing” (original) send it in 😉 v
@David Kromer:
> as technology becomes cheaper, the focus
> on creative process and craftsmanship
> becomes rarer
Strange. I notice the opposite. Technology becomes cheaper and ubiquitous, so the only way to differentiate yourself from the competition is by focusing on creative process and craftsmanship. There is so much junk out there that those films who are creative and show craftmanship stick out like lighthouses in the dark.
What’s a bad script with bad camera work? A bad film.
What’s a bad script with superb camera work? Still a bad film. What’s a good script with bad camera work? Yep, still a bad film.
What’s a good script with superb camera work? A good film!
🙂
Short film script submitted: The Other Baby
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 8th, 2011 at 8:17 pm
Many thanks! Great title…
Accepting TV pilots?
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 8th, 2011 at 8:55 pm
Sure – but they are not priority FYI.
I hope you’ve watched “Malkovich’s Mail” before making this offer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fStddNII-DY
I’ve got a rather good, recent and gripping story for you, Mr Laforet. It was originally written as a TV series, but I could see it as a movie.
I’ll be writing up a treatment of it for you to peruse, it’s a several season/movie concept, but in the mean time, you can check out the Proof of Concept I just finished for it right here!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5J2qG1oXhKw
Made in 10 days, no budget, on a 60D. Pacing’s not the best, but it’s a proof of concept/trailer/hey-look-I-can-make-stuff showreel, so it had to showcase many things. Let me know if you’d like to read more – it’s a very rich, deep story, with strong characters, a driving plot that hooks you in hard, and a climaxes abound!
This is wonderful of the best blogs in the domain of education. If I don’t come in for a pair of days, there are so many posts that it’ll pick out me a couple of hours just to go through whatever I overlooked!! Kudos.
@Mark, you’re right that this should be case… but I have a hard time finding good ol’ stories on youtube or Vimeo. I’m talking about stuff like Amazing Stories (the Spielberg-produced series from the 80’s)… or Twilight Zone or Tales from the Crypt,,, the kind where I’m *not* noticing the high-quality production (though it’s there) or the crafty editing style (though it’s there too)- because I’m too wrapped up in the story.
Same thing happened with music. I was once privileged to meet with Richard Henrickson, who is the violinist on some Britney Spears and other famous people’s pop tracks. The guy played beautiful, incredible classical tunes- and is obviously more capable than what he produces for a living.
So why is pop music so full of crap (not that all of it is, but much of it is)?
Because it’s what the people want. And people want it because the record companies push it. And record companies push it because they know they can sell it. And they know they can sell it because it’s what people are used to hearing- and to quote Jordan Kaplan, “repetition breeds affinity”. People generally go for what they’re used to seeing/hearing in a professional medium like radio (it’s the same reason we associate 24fps with higher quality than 30fps… not because it’s better, it’s actually lower temporal resolution, but because we’re used to seeing it on big movies screens, so we draw stupid but inevitable associations… something several in the industry are trying to undo, as you know)… and once the technology became so easy that anyone can produce “music”, the world became flooded with crap so much that it’s what people became used to hearing- what they expect. And then it comes full circle that as a master violinist, you have to make a living off of people’s unfortunate expectations.
So I’d say that the democratization of technology should result in better storytelling and more opportunities for creativity, but unfortunately the track record isn’t always the case with that… and youtube is 99% garbage.
To take another example- if you said to everyone in the world that they can now get food ingredients for free, how many would really be able to cook good, quality food? How many would try to be fancy and end up creating ridiculous meals that look great on paper but just don’t have that masterful taste? The master chefs know how that very often, simpler is better… or to quote Steve Jobs, “Simplicity is the height of Sophistication”- but too often people try to be sophisticated with their camera, food, music, or technology- simply because they can (and couldn’t before)- and the result is that they lose the essence of their craft.
Just to be clear- I’m an amateur who grew up with technology… not some old master luddite 😉 My above rant is kindof my own inner battle to try and become an old master one day, many years from now, in a world that seems to value fancy technology more than good ol’ stories more and more.
🙂
[/end rant]
I’ve told a Friend of mine – Rob Badorf – to contact you. He has a script I believe you will love!
Hi Vincent
I sent you my feature film script and query letter in the email. Hope you love everything
Hi Vicent , like i m not a writer but i do have an idea that blends actual facts and conspiracy that “explains” our international economics crisis and world domination, energy crisis and second world war is that fits your target? once again the idea it self (because i not a writer) has 4 pages and i m trying to explain as simple as possible (was a dream 🙂
is more kind of short with some dialogue and lots of b rolls …
cheers..
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 24th, 2011 at 10:47 am
Absolutely – kindly consider submitting it.
Hi Vincent,
I have a short science fiction film that plays with the same theme as Bladerunner. There’s no dialogue in the script so what I’ll do is, send you a link to the animatic – if that’s alright with you? 🙂
Also, I’m actually an aspiring writer and director and would just like to ask if by submitting our stories this would mean that you would only consider it only if you would be the director. I hope that came across properly with no disrespect to you or to your generous opportunity.
Kind regards,
Mark
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 29th, 2011 at 10:25 pm
Mark no worries and I totally understand. I would only be interested in directing at this point as I’m not yet a “producer” if you will who can fund other people’s projects. I’m sure that will change at some point. Cheers – v
Have an idea involving a fishing trawling tragedy back in 1968 here in the north of England. Based on a true story, it’s a mix of conspiracy, drama, romance, disaster, courage, survival and change. Based around this event http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hull_triple_trawler_tragedy_(1968)
Float your boat?
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 29th, 2011 at 10:23 pm
yes of course – pls send it in – v
@Jonathan Richards, OK – give me a few days and I’ll get it across to you.
I have been wanting to do a bank robbery movie but use tighter angles for the shots. With DSLR tech I think it could be done in a really fun way. I have a script that is far from finished but would be happy to send the basic beginnings if you would like to see them.
Vincent Laforet Reply:
November 30th, 2011 at 10:14 pm
I would need a strong treatment at least. Cheers – v
DUE TO THE POVERWHLEMING RESPONSE TO THIS CALL TO ACTION – WE ARE TEMPORARILY NO LONGER ACCEPTING SUBMISSIONS as we begin the process of reviewing submissions to date. We will announce when we re-open the submission process.
re-opened yet?
Vincent Laforet Reply:
February 26th, 2013 at 11:52 am
No. Legal mumbo jumbo. hate it.